The challenge this week is to post a Cinquain
A poem composed of five lines
Line 1 has one word (the title).
Line 2 has two words that describe the title.
Line 3 has three words that tell the action.
Line 4 has four words that express the feeling,
Line 5 has one word which recalls the title in some way.
To join in the fun
Everyone just seem to be having so much fun with this...
So I thought I would give it a try!
It was fun!
Picture "Ecstasy" by Maxfield Parrish
Ecstasy
Pleasure unlimited
Contintment with delirium
joy far beyond belief
Blissfulness
I like it!!! May I have some too?
ReplyDeletedang Linda ..you knock the crap out of that one...im saying homerun...i sort of remember that feeling...very well done lady
ReplyDeleteDown John ... relax LOL
ReplyDeleteHi Linda ... this was really ahem ... expressive. Loved it.
"Contentment with delirium" ... (see above) but this line is just screaming out at me, "I am so at peace but never let it end".
Welcome here, and both you and John should come by more often. Enjoyed this read.
Now, I'm off to get John a cold compress. 8=)
tell him to sit on an iceberg he will be alright in a few ...millennium
ReplyDeleteWe maybe should give him the name "Gigantic" instead of Titantic, maybe? What'cha think, Gator? (Smirking here and so hope that didn't ruffle his feathers.)
ReplyDeleteWow for someone who says she can't write.....I believe you are only fooling yourself now....because we all know better.
ReplyDelete(better go rescue John from that iceburg Linda)
You know what they say about a penquin with big webbed feet. . .
ReplyDeleteOkie Dokie, I'll bite ... what do they say?
ReplyDelete(ducks fer cover in the meantime)
It really doesn't matter, as the ice water totally cancels out that statement. Very sad indeed. Do you think we waddle normally?
ReplyDeleteI was thinkin it meant you swim fast
ReplyDeleteWell, if nothing else, it certainly means balance when ya water ski, I have to admit that much.
ReplyDeleteHow come all the handsome sexy men are here and you didn't invite me over?
ReplyDeleteah ah ah......ahtchoo!!!!!
ReplyDeleteMaybe because it isn't my page.
ReplyDeleteOh wait, you were asking Linda.
My bad! Grinning
Rhut roh ... who ya allergic too???
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ReplyDeletenot allergic...you're the reason for sneezin
Me? What? (Sniffs armpits) Yeah, I smell clean, so what gives?
ReplyDeletefollow the link
ReplyDeleteJust left there. I am sooooooo in trouble now ... I think LOL
ReplyDeleteI have tissue....soft ones...
ReplyDeleteHA!! The way I sneeze, there won't be anything left of them.
ReplyDeleteWhat a way to wake up on a Monday morning
ReplyDeletehttp://tabbynera.multiply.com/journal/item/978/Poetry_Posse_-_Week_24_Cinquaine
Linda I think you hit the ball right out of the park with this one.
ReplyDeleteSurprise of the century. Look how great your entry is.
ReplyDeleteEcstacy. I feel the delirium. It's making me dizzy, in a pretty way.
Glad you finally joined in the fun.
Thanks for the visit and the kind comment. You are uber sweet.
I wonder why the Penguin deserves you.
BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletethats perfect...:)
ReplyDeletevery nice... full of passion!!! i like i like!!!
ReplyDeletesigh.... very nice!
ReplyDeleteOh my! Wonderful..you are so creative..gotta love it..sure is lots of sneezin goin on..giggle.
ReplyDelete:-)
ReplyDeleteI love the picture you use with this poem! And I love the poem!
ReplyDeleteVery Very Nice post for this theme.
ReplyDeletePoem Posse ~ Write a Cinquain.
http://jools4.multiply.com/journal/item/544
ReplyDeletenice i feel itx
Beautiful words...
ReplyDeleteYour poem perfectly describes the Parrish work. I had the pleasure of seeing his works as they came through San Diego. Gorgeous.
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